bearded philosopher

bearded philosopher

Friday, April 3, 2009

Study of unknown woman


Large eyes, not too large but large enough to be beautiful. Straight hair, touch of brown, very soft.Well made eyebrows and ya that trademark nose.They say it runs in the family.She was beautiful, sat down in her red dress. Beaming , happy , in control.Large bag, the only element of her which seemed out of proportion.

Unsure what to say, a presence formidable.Next to the right corner of her head you could hear music play. Strange circumstances. Strange days,strange places.

Coffee getting bitter, or was it supposed to be bitter.Some fancy relativity stuff about time is when you see a magnificent dame you loose track of the tick tocks.

Well, time had stopped for me quite unknowingly. My thoughts concentrated on a single nothingness.In her eyes, i saw the eyes of yore, in her cheeks i saw the red of better days.And in that woman sitting in the corner I found a reason to write.

Amen. :)

20 comments:

riff_master said...

hey this one shows a lot of maturity in writing.
i think the details are very nicely done with a lot insight and thought.

beautiful!!!!

cheers!!!

Pretty Me!! said...

may you meet a lot of such beautiful reasons !

h said...

@prats one was this saturday ;)

Ilashree Goswami said...

I loved the description of the girl, and every intricate detail, of which the writer took so close notice of. That's beautiful, and even beautiful is the writer's way of weaving the beauty of the woman in words.

Kudos. Love the writer :)

Keep it going.....

~~PEACE~~

h said...

luv u too and ur comments :)

tanmaya said...

its nicely written... had no idea you could write so well...

ghostrider said...

retarded i say,,:P

boo said...

its well written...i am your twin's frnd...

yamini meduri said...

wow....beautiful narration...!!! I can imagine the place and the situation..!!!

First timer here and defly not the last..!!!

.::FrOzEn::. said...

hmmmm ... Amazing. very clear and detailed description, can easily imagine the whole scene. 'It's the eye that holds the beauty' can perfectly relate with this piece. Good one :)

Pretty Me!! said...

@H : understood ur comment to me now !! thanks if u r talking of me ;)

IcE MaiDeN said...

beautiful!!

cheers,
Annie.

Thoorika said...

Hey, read your mail! Wanted to drop in and say Thanks !!! Take care

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Anonymous said...

beautiful!!!!

cheers!!!

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Winnie the poohi said...

I loved the way you have described the girl and captured the mood.. but this was too short! write longer :P

Aparna said...

she seems enigmatic to me...something mystique about the lady u described

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